Hi my name is Edekai on Tuesday we had athletics day. We had to get water so we won't get thirsty.We did high jump and it was funny because I didn't get through my first one but I had so much fun. We had a sack race because I was jumping so far and I won the race and I was excited. We did long jump and I came last on it because I never jumped far.
What a great jump!
ReplyDeleteKia ora Edekai, my name is Jedi and I am a year seven at yms. This is a great post, but it might be a bit better if you added a few commas in some of your sentences.
I really loved the shot of you jumping, it's really clear. I was just wondering though. Are you wearing mufti, or were you supposed to wear those colours?
Keep up the great work! I hope to see you posting more...
Jedi :D
Hey there Edekai, my name is Parwin and I am a year 7 from Yaldhurst Model School. I like your blog post because you have added information and you also added a photo when you were in mid air which looks really cool! This reminded me of when we had our athletics and I didn't do that bad actually but I could have done better but I had lot's of fun. I think that maybe next time you could maybe add a bit more information at each stage because at the moment, you aren't adding that much information but other than that you did a great job!
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Looking forward to your next blog posts,
Parwin
Hey there Parwin's. I the blog that you gave to me. it is one of a kind
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