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Wednesday 4 December 2019

similes

I am fast as the lightning hitting a tree.
I am so slow that a snail can beat me in a race.
I  am so hard that i can make big rocks crumble in my hand.
I am so fast that I can beat bolt in a race.
My pet cheater is so fast that my pet can beat a Lamborghini in a race.

2 comments:

  1. Kia ora Edekai,

    My name is Olive and I’m one of the new blog commentators in the Kaikohekohe cluster this summer! I’m working the Teaser Week and I’m super excited to see all your blog activities!

    Congratulations on completing your first blog post! What a great start! I enjoyed reading your similes as they were super inventive and made me laugh! It would be so awesome to see some colour and crazy fonts to match your creative writing! You get more points for creativity! How about it? I also really liked your description of your pet cheetah! You must have quite the imagination! I’d love to see you draw a picture of you and your pet cheetah and make a blog post about! Let me know how you go, I can’t wait to hear back!

    You and some other classmates have been challenged by me to make up your own simile, where you describe yourself as an animal! I’ll have a go! Olive is as loud as a barking seal! Hahah, my friends say when I get excited I chat a lot! I can’t wait to see what you come up with!

    Thank you for your great blog post and have fun completing the rest of the activities.

    Feel free to check out my blog and get to know me a little better!
    https://olivesljprogram.blogspot.com/

    If you’d like to meet my lovely team you can here.
    https://sites.google.com/site/summerlearningjourney/meet-the-team?authuser=0

    I’m super excited to see what else you come up with this week!

    Ngā mihi,
    Olive

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  2. hi my name is tewaipuke I love your fast as a bolt and slow like a snail that is all for me if you want you can se my blog cold https://kpstewaipuket.blogspot.com/ that is it bye

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