Kia Ora Edekai, My name is Marta, I am a year 8 student from Tautoro School. I really enjoyed your poem about a stick, It is interesting how you made a normal stick to a very interesting poem. Maybe next time you could insert the feeling of the stick by saying "I was snapped off a tall tree and flew with the wind" or something like that. This reminds of when I read a book called "THE BOOK OF STICKS". Have you ever read the book of sticks before? Well that's all I got, Blog You Later (:;D) Maybe you can check out my blog... https://tsmathas.blogspot.com/
Kia Ora Edekai,
ReplyDeleteMy name is Marta, I am a year 8 student from Tautoro School.
I really enjoyed your poem about a stick, It is interesting how you made a normal stick to a very interesting poem.
Maybe next time you could insert the feeling of the stick by saying "I was snapped off a tall tree and flew with the wind" or something like that.
This reminds of when I read a book called "THE BOOK OF STICKS".
Have you ever read the book of sticks before?
Well that's all I got, Blog You Later (:;D)
Maybe you can check out my blog... https://tsmathas.blogspot.com/