Two days ago on Friday at night I had a wananga at Rawhide marae to do kapa haka.
To get there we had to go on the ferry.
When we got there we were driving too fast I got car sick.
Finally we arrived at Rawhide marae.
we got all our stuff out of the vane.
That sounds like lots of fun. Can you make sure you read your writing and check that it makes sense. Also Rawhiti Marae is the name of a place so should have capitals.
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